Comments on: A Land of Make-Believe by Avis Hickman-Gibb

By: Avis HG

Avis HG — Tue, 17 Mar 2009 23:41:22 +0000

Thanks CW I am flattered by your comments. Followed the link back to your home, but got lost. But thanks again for your comments.

By: Creative Writer

Creative Writer — Mon, 22 Dec 2008 06:01:21 +0000

Wow. That is one great short story. I would love to see a sequel to it. Personally I am not very good at writing short stories, but I am constantly trying to learn how to make it better. Please feel free to provide any advice. Thanks in advance!!

By: Avis HG

Avis HG — Thu, 04 Sep 2008 14:15:44 +0000

Thanks for these comments, they mean a lot.

By: Rod Tanzol

Rod Tanzol — Mon, 04 Aug 2008 09:03:31 +0000

This speaks to me. It makes me nostalgic for the warmth of my childhood. I love it!

By: Robin Herrnfeld

Robin Herrnfeld — Fri, 18 Jul 2008 14:06:11 +0000

Lovely memories of a summer day in childhood. Nice one, Avis!

By: jennifer walmsley

jennifer walmsley — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 13:29:52 +0000

A wonderful nostalgic flash. Really enjoyed it.

Jennifer

By: Bill West

Bill West — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 11:52:18 +0000

Nice one, Avis!

By: Oonah V Joslin

Oonah V Joslin — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 11:30:29 +0000

Hello Avis. Another nice one!

By: Frances

Frances — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 11:07:29 +0000

Lovely, Avis! It even brings back the flavour of raspberry ripples.

By: Sarah Hilary

Sarah Hilary — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 10:38:30 +0000

Lovely adventure story, Avis, reminded me of summers as a child.