Comments on: What She Gave Up by Jake Wickenhofer http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/ Backhand Stories is a creative writing blog that supports new writing and the writing community by publishing new short story fiction, creative writing, short non-fiction stories and essays by new and unpublished writers Tue, 07 Sep 2010 05:58:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Dana Marie http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-16251 Dana Marie Sun, 15 Nov 2009 22:55:58 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-16251 Amazing! I wish it were longer though, keep writing. I'd love to read more. read my fictions? Your critique is appreciated. http://authspot.com/novels/blood-runs-forever-chapters-one-and-two/ Amazing! I wish it were longer though, keep writing. I’d love to read more.

read my fictions?
Your critique is appreciated.

http://authspot.com/novels/blood-runs-forever-chapters-one-and-two/

]]> By: Tristan Sender http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-16016 Tristan Sender Wed, 04 Nov 2009 12:39:44 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-16016 Great story. The way you the describe the evolution and coming to life of a piece of art from the initial sketches to the 'birth' of a living person is wonderful. Keep writing! Great story. The way you the describe the evolution and coming to life of a piece of art from the initial sketches to the ‘birth’ of a living person is wonderful. Keep writing!

]]> By: A Curiouse Person http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-12406 A Curiouse Person Mon, 08 Jun 2009 19:25:52 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-12406 i'm impressed, its a sweet story, with the affection the brothers clearly share, its as if the 1 brother watches over his brother like a gaurdian watches over his charge. The artist seems, young, childish, but then he seems to know more aboout life, and love, with his wife gone, and the pictures he draws. What an inturesting character, i would like to know more about him and his brother. They're dynamic, and i have a feel of reclusiveness, a smooth mood, that makes me want to read more into it. I hope you decide to write about these brothers again. i’m impressed, its a sweet story, with the affection the brothers clearly share, its as if the 1 brother watches over his brother like a gaurdian watches over his charge. The artist seems, young, childish, but then he seems to know more aboout life, and love, with his wife gone, and the pictures he draws. What an inturesting character, i would like to know more about him and his brother. They’re dynamic, and i have a feel of reclusiveness, a smooth mood, that makes me want to read more into it. I hope you decide to write about these brothers again.

]]> By: Texage http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-10836 Texage Wed, 22 Apr 2009 01:37:40 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-10836 This was excellent. I only wish it was longer - I was just getting into the story when it ended! This was excellent. I only wish it was longer – I was just getting into the story when it ended!

]]> By: Rosalie Vaslyss http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-10799 Rosalie Vaslyss Sun, 19 Apr 2009 13:32:34 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-10799 I...once gave up writing because I thought I wasn't good enough, I don't know why I'm choosing to say that but...just keep writing! Don't ever stop, you're really, really good! I…once gave up writing because I thought I wasn’t good enough, I don’t know why I’m choosing to say that but…just keep writing! Don’t ever stop, you’re really, really good!

]]> By: acbunne7 http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-10722 acbunne7 Sat, 11 Apr 2009 16:18:06 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-10722 Great job Jake! Love this story like I always do. Keep up the good work! Great job Jake! Love this story like I always do. Keep up the good work!

]]> By: Jesus http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-10657 Jesus Mon, 06 Apr 2009 00:04:04 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-10657 Very...interesting...WE'RE GOING TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD with the amazing literature contained herein :] Very…interesting…WE’RE GOING TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD with the amazing literature contained herein :]

]]> By: annomous http://www.backhandstories.com/fiction/what-she-gave-up-by-jake-wickenhofer/comment-page-1/#comment-10654 annomous Sun, 05 Apr 2009 15:41:45 +0000 http://www.backhandstories.com/?p=167#comment-10654 The story is great! Its very interesting. Keep writing. Your awsome:) The story is great! Its very interesting. Keep writing. Your awsome:)

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